I can't say I didn't get what I came for. I was rather amused by how obviously it was based on the 2003 movie. I don't recall the bit about a kiss on the corner of Wendy's mouth from any other versions, although it's possible it just wasn't significant enough in any other version for me to remember it, and the lingering description of the harness which holds on Hook's hook left very little doubt in my mind that I wasn't just picturing Jason Isaacs because I am wont to picture Jason Isaacs. And I have always been intrigued by the dark elements of Peter Pan's story, which are on full display here.
Why can't I like it more: the writing. The writing is quite florid at times, and I can't say that's necessarily inappropriate, given the source material. That still doesn't mean I necessarily care for three hundred pages of it. I see what the author was doing here. It is generally a kind of thing that I like. I don't regret having read it. But I probably won't reread it, and I'm not interested in reading any more in the series.
Overall: C